Saturday, July 24, 2010

Puppy dog

There was once a puppy dog,
Own by a cat lover,
Be it tiny or tall,
Or adores by all,
Still, it's the kittens that it despises.

1 comment:

  1. Your poem is a limerick, I think. However, it is not in a format that limericks are supposed to be in. The 1st, 2nd and 5th lines are supposed to rhyme with each other, while the 3rd and 4th lines are supposed to rhyme too. However, your 1st, 2nd and 5th lines do not rhyme. So, you do not have a limerick format. However, ignoring what was said, I do think that your limerick makes no sense, as most limericks are.

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