Journal according to investigator

Hmmm....... It's kind of unbelieveable that the murderer does not leave a single, minute evidence behind. First, the whole house is messed up, and Patrick was killed, how could I imagine that who has such an ability to crawl up to Patrick without any noise and hit him hard on his head. How did that person even be able come in to his house, the funniset part is Patrick was hit on the head and no blood stain was left behind at all! This is really interesting, my first instinct would be Mary, but she had prove that she was away when Patrick was hit. No one else has the key to his house, could it be that Mary found out his affair and killed him, leave the scene immediately to the grocer? Even it is her, what weapon could she used that has such strong blow on Patrick that cause death? Too much fishy points to this murder case, I shall go back to the scene tomorrow and see if I could find more evidence to this case.

The reason of my ending

I ended the story with the tiger tearing him into pieces. From what I think and some evidence from the passage, she would most probably ask him to choose the door with the tiger as she herself could not bear to part with nor she want him to be married to another person. With some struggle there, I could see that jealousy and selfishness had deeply affected her decision to which doors she directed him to go. Therefore, I chose the door with the tiger as in a girl's point of view, who would want to see her lover to leave her, maybe death is a better option to both of them. In the end, I decided to make a twist, so I stated in my ending her feeling and why she decided that door for him. Again, in a girl's point of view, seeing her lover dying in front of her also cause a lot of hurt to her till she would want to commit suicide, and added the fact of her selfishness, she would think that she would not leave her lover to die himself, therefore, I said that the princess also committed suicide in the end. This kind of situation also happens in reality too and the ending of most of these people will be like what I have written.

Ending of Lady or Tiger

Could the audience believe their sight of that, the prowling of the tiger tore him into several pieces, blood was spluttered everywhere. The king gasped a deep breath and said," Well, that means the youth is fated not to have a wife. " The king left after he finish him speech and so does the audience, all of them sighing. The princess was the only one left, staring blankly on the amphitheater, seeing his lover's body separated into parts and his blood stains all over the ground, gradually, her eyes got watery and she cried uncontrollably, in her heart, she was muttering," I could not stand watching you marrying another person, which I hated so much, other than me, forgive me for my selfishness, but I thought you would have the same thinking as me, right? You also cannot bear to part with me right? Although you have leave me, but you will never be lonely, I will definitely go together with you." After an hour, she returned to his father, his father console her," Dont be too sad, my daughter, he is not a person that you should love, the result just now showed us clearly, you should start clearing up your feelings ok?" She nodded her head and went back to her room. Just that night, she committed suicide.

Reflection on composition

Haizzz, my composition really is terrible. I do not know why my english teacher says my composition is not considered is terrible, but what I saw in the composition were red underlines and red underlines, worse is, lots of bad comments. Still, I would take this a lesson and I would improve my composition according to the comments given. Even so, composition is not an easy component in english that is easy to improve, you have to keep on writing continuously and read lots of books to improve our vocabulary. I have heed an advice from my cousin that the main about composition is the clarity of it and the reader must understand what is happening. Maybe that's what lack in my composition. Since clarity comes first in priority, I must make sure that the next composition I write is clear and a usage of adequate vocabulary, I really wonder how I did for my composition assignment......

Reflection on Lesson 6

Well, this week we have been doing on composition and comprehension because next week is our test. I am really worried about my comprehension as that is the worst section I am at in english. But luckily, it is only a 20% of our total score. Since the composition has a weightage of 80%, I am quite worried for it too because once that is badly done, my whole msg score will be pulled down because of english, the worst is that, the test is held just after the chinese new year, how bad!!!! I cannot believe that they expect us to revise during chienese new year, how are we suppose to have that energy and mood to revise? I could not really understand my teacher on why he chose this date for the test? Even my chinese teacher postponed the date of our chinese test to a later date, why could not he do the same thing? Everything seems to be a question mark to me.......

Reflection on narrative writing

This week, we learn narrative wrting which include protagonist and antagonist. We read a very interesting story named ' The lamb to the slaughter'. This story is about a policeman having an affair with another woman outside despite having a wife. The wife was totally shocked and kept on begging him not to go but he provoked her with just two words 'Try me'. She took out a lamb leg from the freezer and hit hard on his head. He just fell dead instantly but the most interesting part is that his wife was exceptionally clever which planned an alibi so perfectly that when the police come, they could not find the weapon and they did not even suspect her as they tought that she herslef as a policeman's wife would never commit a crime. Guess where the weapon went? It was already inside the oven. The funniest part is, they actually ate the weapon. How stupid they are! I think that the policemen are too reckless as they should not judge a person by her status but most importantly is, they too trusted her......

Mary Maloney's point of view

The police here are so stupid, they have already eaten the murder weapon and they still want to find it! My alibi works perfectly and the police had never even thought of me being the murderer. Anyway, Patrick deserves to die! Who ask him to have another woman outside, but I would not have killed him if he returns to me but he not only did not do so, he also dared him to stop him. My anger had reached the maximum limit and I just took the lamb leg and hit him hard on his head. That is the perfect weapon and he himself died because he thought I am a very weak woman which he need not defend against. The police are so reckless, just because I am a policeman's wife, they never take me as an suspect but ven they think I am, I have a witness which is the grocer, Sam. This case will never resolved anymore......